Today is yours

     marked your soul once more

     can I not prove

     as time goes by

     kept everything inside of me

     can I trust in you

     there is one thing you should know

     today is yours though

     today is yours though

Keyword:

Report this story | Add to Favorites | Send to Friends | Author's Profile

No Comments posted

Comments (4)

Posted by the Processor 2008-01-25 11:20:51 ... yep, another random poem that makes no sense..I can try to explain the concept but do I really have too...if you read this I'd prefer you check out my other stories listed on my profile...still working on the 3rd segment of the processor ..write on all!! + Report this comment
Posted by Behind_the_Mask 2008-06-13 10:55:58 ... I like the last two lines, overall it sounded like the last words of an older person to their younger predecessor + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-06-13 21:17:00 .... This was perhaps too personal and specific to a person to be understood by a random reader. Still it had a bit of passion behind it + Report this comment
Posted by allmine 2008-09-27 13:40:11 .... Make it longer so the ide is a little more apparent, but it might just be a personal message to someone? I dunno...but if it is, then that might make a good frirst line, so the rest of us aren't like what? + Report this comment

Post a comment

Post a comment