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Suicide

         The wires in me have decayed

         It’s the only way

         Once you become something you’re not

         You feel the need to make it stop

         Well know that’s what I’ve done

         I’ve shut off what I’ve become

         So don’t cry for me

         Someday you will see

         My demise was the only option for me

         And when I’m gone

         Please try to move on

         I wouldn’t want you to end up like me

         A rotting carcass that has been only set free

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Posted by Egoist 2008-01-26 16:26:48 .... I liked the different rhymes you chose. The poem gets it's point across even for how short it is. I find it deep. + Report this comment
Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery 2008-05-12 17:23:55 .... Short, but sweet and too the point. I liked this a lot, but I have one question. Why is this posted under "horror"? + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-05-28 15:48:16 .... i have to say that i really liked the last line of your poem "a rotting carcass that has been only set free" nice short little poem ya have there! + Report this comment

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