Pleadings In Hell

I want to touch you on the other side

Where all your darkness pain and fear reside

I want to get to know the part of you

That I can crawl inside

The heart of you

Please can you make this true?

It’s all I can ever do

You are the orchestra in me

You are the only thing that can set me free

I am down here in the gates of hell

Down here there is no way to tell

If you are ever coming down to rescue me

But I sit here trying to believe

And still trying to see

But I see evidence in how you hold your head

And I see evidence in how you say what’s said

I see it written in your eyes

How you have been hypnotized

You have been polluted and computed by time

I just wish you could save yourself from it all

Leave all that **** behind

The flames down here are getting higher

Soon your face is going to expire

Along with everything else that had been so desired

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Posted by r.e.potter 2008-01-25 10:01:58 ... Reminds kinda in a sort of way a story i've read in the 'book of John. good lil poem though. + Report this comment
Posted by Sad Sara 2008-03-08 00:58:18 Sentimental... Sure, but sort of scary as hell too I tell yer. That was love intensified, pesonified, and versified. Damn (Yeah, I'm that bad of a reviewer today) 'Anna + Report this comment
Posted by jt conner 2008-05-01 19:47:45 .... Thought it was a great representation of the human condition when it goes through troubled times. + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-05-27 19:31:35 .... scary? i dont really know how it is scary but it sure was a mighty good poem. I especially liked this line: "you have been polluted and computed by time" :) + Report this comment

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