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Written by cody brinkman (fresh ta deff)   
Wednesday, 23 January 2008

I think deep, roll slick

Avoid transgression

It seems its getting thicker

After every single session

My progression

Is that of digression

Is it really as ill as this?

 

Im tired when I wake up

Time to bake up

Tie my shoes

Get for the shake up

 

My mouth stays shut

 

Is it really as ill as this?

 

Fallout, im living in a shelter

Helter skelter

In a hoodie in this hot summer swelter

I am living all alone with my helper

Your worst enemy's your best friend

Is it really as ill as this?



Copyright 2008 cody brinkman (fresh ta deff)
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Comments (4)
Posted by tarhead
2008-01-23 21:40:03
nice

got some format funk runnin amok in there - liked the content though.
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Posted by C.R. Vard
2008-01-24 19:16:29
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In a hoodie in this hot summer swelter- can definitely relate to that.

Nice poem, even if the format was off
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Posted by Captain Morgen
2008-02-07 17:31:31
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"Time to bake up"...is that in reference to getting stoned? Just wondering :P Good poem
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-02-10 10:51:34
interesting

i liked this.

"getting thicker after every session"

i really liked that line.
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