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Seven Deadly Sins


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Written by Egoist   
Saturday, 26 January 2008

Little by little my desires of you grow ever more

Under lying sheets expresses my amour

Sometimes I show you some antics

Time will never consume my tactics

 

Gulp down and swallow my necessaries

List me lines for the cry of my tummy

Undeveloped desires of what I wish

This is me who wants your dish

To be ruled so royal

Over-consumption is too normal

Never am I too picky

Yet I withhold from the needy

 

Give me what I want

Riches of money and women for me to flaunt

Everything can be mine

Everything with such divine

Deserves to be handled with my shrine

 

So I make you do my work

Like apathy is only here to lurk

Offering uneasiness of my mind

To which I become confined

Helplessly falling behind

 

With revenge’s eye viewing me in despite of my conscious

River will flow red so anxious

Anger fills me up from stupidity

To why I don’t feel guilty

Humbly I take the sword of such duty

 

Entity of such qualities I deserve

Nothing of me is as preserved

Vanquish these qualities, which should be mine

Yearnings of others I will find

 

Picturing those of such qualities of skills

Repeating their joyous thrills

am of much higher level

Discovering more about me with each dawdle

Everything I vaunt that I find more real

Copyright 2008 Egoist
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Comments (9)
Posted by r.e.potter
2008-01-28 11:00:36
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Cool idea for a poem...like it alot...well done
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Posted by 1800
2008-01-28 11:02:00
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Unique idea! Never thought of it that way.
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Posted by Egoist
2008-01-28 11:56:12
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Thanks, I had a bit of time on my hands, and decided to write something on my favorite obsession. It was a fun task to do, and I recommend it when anyone gets bored, to just write a poem to spell what ever it is you like.
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Posted by Pez
2008-01-28 12:32:14
OH yeah!

These are always fun to write... what are they called? Umm, anagrams? Yeah, I think so, but I'm not sure.

And the Seven Deadly Sins concept I'm glad you brought up. I remember being obsessed with them when they were first introduced to me in English class. There's this awesome poem that connects the seven deadly sins to the seven dwarfs in Snow White. You have to read it! It's called: Snow White and the Seven Deadly Sins by R.S. Gwynn.
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Posted by Egoist
2008-01-28 12:43:17
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Hey, thanks for the advice, I'll look into reading that story, it sounds interesting.
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Posted by sgulab
2008-05-13 12:42:17
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awesomeness. loved the idea and the fact that u choose like the right colors to. it was great :D
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-05-13 12:52:40
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you did a superb job on this
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Posted by Egoist
2008-05-14 14:56:28
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So you noticed the colors? Thank you.
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Posted by Egoist
2008-05-14 14:58:32
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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