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Corrosive Green

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Written by Andrew Handley

Saturday, 19 January 2008

corrosive green    a whisper across my tongue    forcing introspective prosecution a ballad repressed and for ages unsung offspring of fire    shelter of men the fabled tree of life bids chemical gateways to open senses extended brainwaves distended the joyous slave found euphoria while the cancerous heart pretended they roam the streets of our cities selling enlightenment for a fee but all that I seek in you    is all I will ever find in me        Spirits ascended reality suspended have any of you found this euphoria? or is it just my heart that's pretended language escapes the quivering mind paranoia locks confidence behind gate and key all that I seek in you could easily be found within me Copyright 2008 Andrew Handley Keyword: Report this story | Add to Favorites | Send to Friends | Author's Profile No Comments posted Comments (5) Posted by tarhead 2008-01-20 23:35:01 nice chasing the thirst... + Report this comment Posted by Dirkin 2008-01-21 02:16:38 .... Selling enlightenment for a fee, the image that looks like weed, I interpret this poem as herb culture. Am I close? + Report this comment Posted by psYchic_spOnge 2008-01-21 02:35:44 correct yea just my personal thoughts on a popular plant + Report this comment Posted by psYchic_spOnge 2008-01-21 02:38:07 p.s. im thinking about cutting the picture, because i think it gives too much away and i want this to be thought about more. + Report this comment Posted by C.R. Vard 2008-01-21 05:11:31 .... nicely written...it reminded me of that poem Dirkin wrote. + Report this comment Post a comment Post a comment

 

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