The People From The Sky I: Man On The Moon

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Day 1 To whom it may concern: That...

if i fall, i fall


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Written by cody brinkman (fresh ta deff)   
Wednesday, 16 January 2008

You count all you can

The numbers don't make sense though do they?

No, they make no sense at all...

But what is most discerning...

Is that they make perfect sense...

 

i say 2 and 2 make 5

but if it needs to be 4, that's ok too.

 

 

 

 

And I came to the end of another road

Only to make a left and begin another

It's been a long walk

And I still stand here

I think ill go home now

But that would be ridiculous

Yes that would be nice

 

 

 

I see you there

Your not real yet,

No your only an object

And I an object to you

No we don't become real until we see a use for each other

And then the war starts see?

 

 

I came up with my head sore

From the pavement

What it needed was a pillow

I needed comfort

And it was hard to obtain indeed

Then I saw it

Yes it was there

Then I went to lay back

And fall and nap

Rest

But the pillow was gone

And I hit my head on the pavement

 

 

 

If I fall I fall



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Posted by Egoist
2008-01-24 12:37:22
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Wow, this is quite different.

I really like the last line, but my favorite part would be when speaking about the 'object' and 'we don't become real until we see a use for each other' and 'and then the war starts.'

I really like that thought.
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-03-26 00:09:24
missed this one

completely. i was strolling around the randoms - this i very interesting. i has a good introspective thing going on.
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