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A Crash And A Secret


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Written by Carl Norwood   
Tuesday, 15 January 2008
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A Crash and A Secret - CS Norwood 16 Jan 08 (1:00am)

 
Nothing exciting ever happens here in the U.K. You're best watching the news for the exciting life.

 
Well, let's see about that.

 
My wife and I, Karen, were taking a romantic stroll down to a secluded island within fifteen minutes walk from where we lived. Wigg Island is a nice place for a walk, hardly anybody goes there. Probably not that many couples in need of trying to work on their marriage unlike us two at this time.

 
We left the house around 8:30pm and it was still dark. We entered the bridge that crossed over to the Island about 8:45pm and the sky was getting very black. By that time our eyes had more than adjusted to the darkness and we were ready for the trek around the Island.

 
By this time we started holding each others hands and smiling at each other. That's a good start for a romantic walk to try and find a spark in your relationship that's been missing for some time. We both knew the walk would be at least an hour around the Island and I'm sure that Karen had some of those extra thoughts about what could happen on a particular walk like this. We both even took a little money with us so that we could possibly drop into a pub on the way back home.

 
Some of the sights had passed within the first ten minutes of the romantic time. We had started even to talk about certain problems that each of us have between us within our marriage. We had reached the lookout posts were during the daytime people would take they're binoculars and bird watch. We took a stop, turned to each other and just looked into each others eyes.

 
As we looked up at the sky to locate were the North Star was at that time we noticed another light that seemed to be falling.

 
I looked at Karen as she did exactly the same. We checked again at the falling light and it was still there high in the atmosphere but definitely moving downwards.

 
"Could be an omen."  I said.

 
"Weird seeing a shooting star." Karen was smiling as if she was happy that an omen like this was meaning something.

 
"But..." I started.

 
Interrupting, Karen said, "Shouldn't it be shooting across the sky instead of just falling?"

 
By this time the falling light was getting bigger and still falling. There was now a definite dark and a light glow surrounding it.

 
"Yeah!" I said, trying quickly to figure out a reason why, "it might have just hit the atmosphere at a funny angle."

 
"It's changed colour in the middle now."

 
The falling light had changed colour, it was now a dark, even black in the middle with a smoky fiery glow surrounding it.

 
"Is it me, or does it look like its heading our way." My voice had a slight worried tone to it.

 
The falling, now an object, was getting bigger, more a shape and had both white and black smoke coming out of it. We both knew it wouldn't be long now before it hit.

 
Karen was still watching it fall in amazement.

 
"Is it a bird," I said trying to be jovial, "is it a plane or is it a U.F.O.?"

 
"Har har." Karen said looking at me with a half blank and half worried look on her face.

 
Within the next five seconds the object showed a black triangular shape with white clouds of smoke blowing from underneath it and the black and grey smoke billowing out of the back of it. Well more billowing above it. It slowed it's descent as it got to about three hundred feet above the ground but still with the white smoke coming out from underneath it faster than ever it made one hell of a thud as it hit the ground.

 
"Wow!" The both of us said that at exactly the same time. We looked at each other in total amazement. In the distance the smoke was quieting down. It was also nearly getting silent. The noise after the crash started off being a loud hissing, fizzling sound but now it was disappearing into nothing.

 
"Should we have a look?" I asked.

 
"Uh?" Karen was staring in the direction of the crashed thing, object, whatever it was. She then looked at me when she regained herself.

 
"Why not?" She said with a grin on her face. Her body was already making its way towards the direction of the crash.

 
As far as I could tell the crash site was only between one hundred and two hundred yards away. With the smoke dying down the night time darkness was taking back over the natural dark view in front of us.

 
"Come on," Karen said waving her hand beckoning me onward.

 
Trying to erase the thoughts of the films I had seen I followed. Some of those films were horrifying, some were just weird, the rest were actually pathetic, thinking about them.

 
We approached slowly towards the crashed ‘thing' with silent caution. Karen was still in front. I was just following her without a proper reason or thought going through my head.

 
What we saw was a black triangular shaped object which was still billowing out but only now slightly, black smoke in parts and white smoke in others. It must have been about twelve to thirteen feet across. I knew that because of the length of our living room. There was a tiny flashing red light on the top of it.

 
Suddenly a hiss sound came as quickly as it went. We both just stared in shock. A lid or something opened. It looked like a black glass window on the side that we were looking at. It was opening very slowly upwards.

 
"What we going to do?" Karen whispered. She now looked scared. I was the one with the most fear I was sure but now just looking into her face I could she that she didn't know what to do.

 
"Shhh!" An I pointed towards the ‘thing'.

 
As we looked the lid had finished opening and a hand like thing grabbed the edge of the object. I could feel my heart pumping. Feeling that I put my arm around Karen hoping that a little comfort would help. She did the same. I could feel my heart racing and a lump in my throat. If this was happening to me then sure it must be happening to Karen too. 

Then as we watched the grey, black gloved hand lifted itself up and we could both now see a head shaped object appear out of the ‘thing'.

 
Through all the fear I realised that the ‘thing' actually looked like one of those stealth bombers the Americans use but very much different. Especially when this one could slow its falling descent to earth without crashing.

 
A whole body started to climb itself out of this craft. I noticed that Karen had an ‘o' shaped on her mouth and realised I was doing the same. At the same time we heard other noises getting closer. They sounded like helicopters.

 
By the time the being climbed out of the craft there were people surrounding the area with guns, the racket of helicopter blades were drowning out every other noise. Three men in camouflage army uniforms had found and picked us up off the floor and pointed in a direction were we should be following another person.

 
The commotion lasted only about five minutes before the helicopters were off again. Both Karen and I were put in the back of a car and debriefed.

 
A test pilot had crash landed. Unfortunately we were there. It was a top secret test flight. And we were not allowed to say anything to anyone. All out details were taken and checked before we got dropped off at home. It all happened so quickly it seemed only about ten minutes before we walked through our front door.

"Wow, that was weird." Karen said. 

"Yep, it's an idea for a short story too." With a smile on my face.



Copyright 2008 Carl Norwood
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Comments (14)
Posted by Roadkill315
2008-01-16 10:25:59
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I loved the last line; "Yep, it's an idea for a short story too." With a smile on my face...

So, did this happen to you and this is that story now in writing :-)
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Posted by r.e.potter
2008-01-18 08:22:50
hmmmm

I was left a little unsatified with the ending by not really knowing if it was a cover up like area 51 supposingly...or not. I guess thats what imagination is for. But it was a fun read regardless.
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Posted by G.D. Howard
2008-01-18 15:06:54
A Crash and A Secret

I really thought this one was going to take that whole aliens from space twist, but the test plane angle was much more entertaining. I am impressed. A very well written story.
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Posted by Barbie
2008-01-19 14:38:58
Fun

Twisty story. Good job.
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Posted by tarhead
2008-01-20 11:08:56
this line...

"I was just following her without a proper reason of thought going through my head." - is very interesting - very English...

my father was a career airman (USA), i was born in cambridge, and visited the u.k. many times less than i wanted.

when i was younger, my nanny, upon hearing a sentence like that from me would have given me a sideways glance and said - "young davie, that sentence is far too wiggly for an american to say. . . looks like the magic is working!"
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Posted by 1800
2008-01-20 12:47:43
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Note to self: do not rekindle marriage by walking on an empty island at night. At least it wasn't sky lab.
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Posted by WLGFX
2008-01-20 12:54:10
Oops!

Hi people. Reading these comments is great, but I would like to say to tarhead, now I've finished giggling, I'm going to change 'of' to 'or', hopefully it will make it less 'wiggly'. I know exactly what you mean.

I also spotted another 'typo'. Easily missed. LOL

I want to eventually write something that will concrete the differences between American and English cultures, especially the language.
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Posted by WLGFX
2008-01-20 13:07:38
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which is better, do you think, to be American or English? I've always wanted to ask
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Posted by tarhead
2008-01-20 15:46:33
both

i was raised with a dual citizenship until 18 - and if i had the choice and the money, it would be 6 months in one country, then 6 months in the other.

i like the u.k. because it is steeped in tradition, i like the u.s. because it is creating tradition.
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Posted by Apocalypse
2008-01-21 22:57:50
The good thing...

The good thing is that your relationship got you two closer than ever after the events.

Or did it...?
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Posted by Apocalypse
2008-01-21 23:03:14
Rephrase

sorry, I meant "your relationship with Karen were revived , after the events."
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-01-22 00:03:19
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An enjoyable story. was it really true life inspired? that would have been freaky
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Posted by WLGFX
2008-01-23 08:50:32
Some facts...

My wife and I did actually take a walk on that Island to revive something. It worked too, we spent about two hours walking around the whole Island. I used that theme and based the crashed top secret plane story around it.
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Posted by John Thorley
2008-01-28 12:22:47
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Nice. I always think with a story like this it's good technique to leave a little doubt hanging in the air. This certainly does that.
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