I step back inside

     to remember once again

     inside a home of love

     inside a house of sin

     many years of me now

     now turned to ash

     possessions to me now

     no comparison of the past

     as I walk amongst memory

     dirty graveyards of dreams

     I think about life

     embarrassing as it seems

     to think of many things

     and wait for my turn

     just like this house

     my existence has burned

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Posted by the Processor 2008-01-10 09:15:55 ... This is horrible...oh wait..I wrote this..in that case, not bad, not bad + Report this comment
Posted by Terry Collett 2008-01-10 09:36:10 .... Philosophical poem; deep. I love these lines: I walk amongst memory dirty graveyards of dreams I think about life embarrassing as it seems to think of many things + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-01-10 16:30:21 .... Liked it. Some deep self reflection shown here + Report this comment
Posted by tarhead 2008-01-10 17:30:32 the picture choice really set the theme. good writing sir processor! + Report this comment
Posted by Captain Morgen 2008-01-10 19:45:38 Like it I laughed out loud at your joke. oh...and by the way the poem was good :P hehe + Report this comment
Posted by the Processor 2008-01-11 05:37:43 ... Thanks to all of you + Report this comment
Posted by deadfamilytree 2008-01-16 21:55:23 nice i like it. it reminds me of when my grandparents lost their home in a fire + Report this comment
Posted by the Processor 2008-02-01 12:37:50 ... I appreciate the comments from all of you...please check out my recently posted poems...I've been trying to continue the chapters of the processor but just cant seem to find the time...hopefully soon! + Report this comment
Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-02-01 18:36:28 ,,, The tradgedy when memories goes up in flames. Nothing more sad then the loss of them. Like always,,,nice job. + Report this comment
Posted by Behind_the_Mask 2008-06-13 10:48:39 ... Deep, thoughtful i liked it. + Report this comment
Posted by dockyard 2008-06-14 14:19:39 .... all i can stress is DESCRIPTIVE WORDS they are like the glitter that keeps my poetry looking radtastic. though message is certainly important, the words and metaphors you choose will be what set your poem a part from the rest. right now your language is feeling a little cliche + Report this comment

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