TO WHOM IT MIGHT CONCERN (Gambia Oct '08)

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Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4

After a while, Don finds his composure and says,...

ghazal for kate


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Written by Kaija Alexandra Thom   
Sunday, 06 January 2008
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a whitewashed fence looks orange beneath the lamplight and
i think she's beautiful, limpid on last autumn's leaves

her knees are stark against the dirt back drop as the bruises blossom
like varying species of olives mounted upon her calves

hand in hand, we stumble through the deadened plots where
the drying sheets look more like billowing, middle-eastern scarves

and the pink fireworks rocket across the asphalt as her
stomach explodes out her throat and into a slew of adjectives


Copyright 2008 Kaija Alexandra Thom
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Comments (5)
Posted by the Processor
2008-01-08 08:45:54
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Another one that I really liked..your descriptions are unlike anything else
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Posted by tarhead
2008-01-08 19:02:23
wow

that left a ton of space for deep thought.
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Posted by Captain Morgen
2008-01-11 12:31:59
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amazing description. I like the idea of the middle-eastern scarfs, its something I would never think of.
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-01-23 23:46:57
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I have no idea what that was about, and it doesnt matter, it was captivating
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-08 13:42:22
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I don't know what 'ghazal' means but that didn't give any attention away from this great Poem!

Like an above commenter said, your descriptions are unlike anything else. Mystical. I loved the last stanza.

Keep em up!
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