Posted by the Processor 2008-01-08 08:45:54 ...
Another one that I really liked..your descriptions are unlike anything else + Report this comment |  |
Posted by tarhead 2008-01-08 19:02:23 wow
that left a ton of space for deep thought. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Captain Morgen 2008-01-11 12:31:59 ....
amazing description. I like the idea of the middle-eastern scarfs, its something I would never think of. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Dirkin 2008-01-23 23:46:57 ....
I have no idea what that was about, and it doesnt matter, it was captivating + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-08-08 13:42:22 ....
     I don't know what 'ghazal' means but that didn't give any attention away from this great Poem!
Like an above commenter said, your descriptions are unlike anything else. Mystical. I loved the last stanza.
Keep em up! + Report this comment |  |