gone was the girl

gone was the girl once innocent of love,...

Unwanted Praise

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Written by Thomas   
Sunday, 06 January 2008
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To write is to express.
To express is open up.

To open up is to be vulnerable.

To be vulnerable is to be in danger.
To be in danger is to be scared.

To be scared is normal.

To be normal is to be boring.

To be boring is to be plain.

To be plain is to be predictable.

To be predictable is to be conventional.

To be conventional is to be like a robot.

To be like a robot is to be mechanical.

To be mechanical is to lose feeling.

To lose feeling is to die inside.

 

- January 6, 2008



Copyright 2008 Thomas
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Comments (3)
Posted by tarhead
2008-01-08 12:41:56
i liked the overall

theme and style, but it appeared to me that you painted yourself into a corner. was that the intent?
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Posted by TNHarvey75
2008-01-08 14:23:08
....

Yeah ... it had to end somewhere.
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Posted by WLGFX
2008-01-11 08:38:55
Good and wierd.

It had a very odd twist for the ending.
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