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Written by Kaija Alexandra Thom   
Thursday, 03 January 2008
the hi-fi plays solace to the
granular lobby upon the television screen;
as it flickers from camera angle to camera angle
(tech step moving company, breaking down to a
                                        white beat)
and i vomit

as a panorama of   ******* spasms
discharge throughout my entire skeleton  
and my pulse beats lightly, kilometres
below a curtain of bloated flesh

tonguing lady lucky's aluminum lips, i'm
pickled in sea of apricot floral: meteor bursts
searing behind goo-goo eyes

and i vomit

unwanted sentence structure, that gets
caught between the chesterfield and my square saturn venus


Copyright 2008 Kaija Alexandra Thom
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Posted by the Processor
2008-01-04 11:02:57
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I want some of whatever your on...just kidding...nicely written
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Posted by Ze.Queen
2008-01-04 12:59:16
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Does this have anything to do with gambling? I got a gambling vibe. I interpreted it as that anyways... Good job though. It was very raw. I like that.

ZQ
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Posted by rock2003
2008-01-04 18:17:39
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hi-fi makes me think of a time long ago, the fifties or the sixties. Chesterfield was a brand of cigarettes (I think they still make it) that was very popular during that time.
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-01-04 18:59:50
That was cool

I really liked this very gritty
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Posted by dockyard
2008-01-05 02:42:43
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chesterfield is what we call a couch in canada. some of the older folks, any how. not based on gambling. based on a panick attack i had.
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-07 11:19:36
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Wow!

This was bloody wonderful!

"as a panorama of fucking spasms ...etc.." that entire stanza blew me away.

Superb work!
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