Posted by the Processor
2008-01-04 10:53:23
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i am the processor
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Posted by dockyard
2008-01-04 10:58:18
What??
No you're not...I am..wait..this says I am Dockyard...but Im not...by the way...Like the poem!!
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Posted by tarhead
2008-01-05 13:18:33
another good one
when you went "through the car windows" i got a little lost in perspective... like going from inside to outside. everything else was vivid though.
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Posted by dockyard
2008-01-06 15:03:33
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hmm. this was quite tricky to write. its something that's supposed to change while you read it. be interpreted in three or four different ways.
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-08 13:38:14
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Feel a tiny bit confused but I think I get it. Pretty damn good Poem if I say so myself. Every line was fantastic. "With sea salt on the brain she slept to eat beer bottles" is just such a cool line I think. Great Work!
Oh yeah, that's a wicked picture.
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Posted by Pilgrim
2008-09-07 13:26:29
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Okay, I'm back to confusion.
Windows of nauseous passengers? Wildflowers? Eat beer bottles?
THat's it, I'm lost.
I need help with this one.
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