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The First Audition


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Written by Morgen Holborn   
Thursday, 03 January 2008
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I walked through the doors of the dark entranceway leading to the main dance floor. It was my first audition. I didn't even know why I decided to try it out. The idea had been put into my head after a conversation I’d had with Jazelle.

            “You’re hot enough. Why don’t you try it out? I got a job the first time I went up there!” she exclaimed.

            “I dunno. You really think I should?” I asked.

            “It’s time to move up from your shitty waitress job, don’t you think?”

            “Yeah, you’re right.”

That had been two weeks ago. Jazelle had gotten me a chance to try out through a conversation with her boss. He was excited to see what I could do.

I stepped up the two stairs leading into the dressing room. They should call it the undressing room I thought to myself. Then I felt disappointed that I had no one to share my clever joke with.

I carefully unzipped my jeans, shimmied out of them, and folded them neatly before placing them onto a small bench. I crossed my arms, with my fingers hatched onto the bottom of my top, and pulled it up and over my head. A full-length mirror positioned itself against the wall. I turned to it and glanced up and down at my half naked body. My shoulders were a little bony, my ribs almost fleshless, but my curvy hips and large breasts made up for it. My bra was blood red. My g-string matched. I tried to calm my nerves but my hands still shook as I strapped on my heels.

“Alright, Hilary, we’re ready for you!” someone yelled.

I walked out and onto the platform. A man and a woman sat at a table in the audience area.

  “I’m ready,” I insisted.

“I like it already,” the man began, “Now what will your dancer name be?”

I hadn’t thought of one beforehand. I felt like smacking myself for not doing so, as Jazelle had advised me to come up with one before I came.

            “Uh…Ginger?” I asked.

            “Taken. Another please,” the woman scowled.

I hesitated, “Oh ok what about Magenta?”

“Good,” she said. She started writing vigorously on her clipboard.

Then they started to play the music. It was sexyback by Justin Timberlake. I happened to really enjoy that song so I immediately felt more comfortable dancing. I wrapped my leg around the pole, my hand clung to it as well, and I bent my back into an arch, and in doing so my breasts became intense cleavage at the top of my lace bra. Then I grabbed the pole with both hands and bent my legs so my ass would be the main focus. I did a few more spins like I’d seen other dancers do. I was inexperienced and my moves were unprofessional but I looked good. After I was all finished they both clapped a few times.

            “Good job, Magenta, You can start at 9:00 next Thursday night,” the man said.

Then the woman spoke, “You’ll need to clean up your moves for next time and you need higher heels. Five inches or taller.”

I was so excited to have the job that I wasn’t insulted by her rude comment like I normally would have been. Next Thursday I would be a stripper. It was the best news I’d heard in a long time. It was the worst news I’d heard as well. How would I tell my mother and father? I knew they would be thinking their once good little girl was dead and a bad, devil of a girl had taken her place. I pushed the thought back into my mind. I’d think about that later. Now all I needed were some new shoes.



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Comments (6)
Posted by the Processor
2008-01-03 13:09:13
Ahhh..wow!!

You wrote this?...it's good
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Posted by tarhead
2008-01-04 14:57:12
i think

it was just an excuse to get new shoes! okay, kiddn

nice inner conflict representation in the end there.
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Posted by 1800
2008-01-05 12:34:56
Caught me by surprise

I thought this was going to be about some girl trying out for some ballet kind of a thing. Every time I read something like that, there is always a mention of how the girl feels about her body, so I was not surprised by the mention of breasts. Even the mention of what is covering them does not shock me, or made me think it was about a stripper. Next thing I know, she was auditioning to be a stripper! Now that, that is a good story!
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Posted by Captain Morgen
2008-01-05 15:42:43
....

thats what i was going for, so I'm glad you were surprised :)
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-01-07 05:45:00
Wow

I also didn't see that coming. Your characterisation is excellent, its easy to believe the narator. =)
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Posted by wbboomer
2008-02-01 21:24:54
Cool Story

Whoa! That's a nice story. You're really good, Captain Morgen! I've been reading your other stuff like Lovers and Sinners. That was good too. Please write more stuff!
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