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a perfect summer evening
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Written by Caitlin   
Thursday, 03 January 2008
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A Perfect Summer Evening

Picture this. You are sitting in a beautiful park on a gorgeous summer evening.

The sun is still shining, the sky is that pretty blue, with some big, white puffy

clouds floating by. The air is pleasantly warm with a hint of honeysuckle.

There’s a little humidity. Not a lot, just enough to let you know that it is indeed

summer. The breeze coming off the lake is refreshingly, cool and as the wonderful

sound of barbershop harmony fills the air, you convince yourself that THIS is what

heaven must be like!

By: Lisa Kyea (RIP: Mom) 



Copyright 2008 Caitlin
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Posted by tarhead
2008-01-03 22:34:02
nice

I am a solar powered beach type but I can appreciate the park picture as well - peace is where your mind puts it, generally not where you think you will find it...
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Posted by C.R. Vard
2008-01-08 18:50:15
good

i liked the reversal, instead of having the tragic news first as the hook we got the good
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Posted by cookingWine
2008-03-08 21:20:56
....

I kind of liked that, in a different way. I'd like to see more of something like this, just a simple scene.

Mainly because I don't have the patience to drag through the longer stories.
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-03-29 19:59:50
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i enjoyed picturing this in my head. this was unlike something i've read before but i loved it.
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