Posted by Captain Morgen
2008-01-03 18:12:34
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ooh i like.
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Posted by Radix77
2008-01-04 22:49:43
This poem brings me...
Pain memories from my high school years...
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Posted by C.R. Vard
2008-01-05 16:57:44
good
and that almost always seems to happen too
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Posted by tarhead
2008-01-06 22:25:26
there is this song
and in the middle goes: i was looking back to see if she was looking back to see if i was looking back to see if she was looking back at me...
boy that's a lot of words.
reminded me a little of that.
nice writing.
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Posted by youdontknowme
2008-01-16 18:32:52
Eyes es fenestra ut animus
I remember a time when a woman looked at me, then looked away, I never stopped looking though, she was beautiful, beyond compare. I continue to look, although sometimes I wonder if she is looking at me or into me.
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Posted by Pez
2008-01-26 21:07:57
I'm sorry, but...
Aww! How cute!... Oi... I'm annoying...
Sigh... that's never happened to me. I look he looks, we look away, he looks I look, we look away... never! Ack! I guess I need to work on being "beautiful, beyond compare." Sorry the wounds are fresh, I just left high school about a year ago... though I could never think too much of high school. Others seemed to make it their whole world... geez... suckers!
Cute poem, again.
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-01-28 21:53:16
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It's funny because the feelings about high school that you have just shared were pretty much the same as mine at the time, and were inspiration for this poem. Hence the 'and lost' of the title
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Posted by Pez
2008-01-29 09:56:50
Really?
Well, it appears we have much a common (^-^).
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Posted by Pez
2008-01-29 09:59:22
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"much IN common"
Excuse my poor grammar.
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Posted by thirteen
2008-02-09 17:27:47
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Normally I just get laughed at before they walk away.
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Posted by 1800
2008-02-09 17:54:51
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The boys watch the girls who watch who boys who watch the girls go by...
I love that Andy Williams song.
I've been in many a situation like this, but my reason was for all the wrong reasons and I had to make I was not spotted.
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-06-08 18:47:47
Aw...
That was like- 'Damn'
I love the innocent feel this verse had.
The 'you give me that funny feeling in my tummy' is the best huh?
I think anyway, if I remember correctly that is.
Loved this one, I'm glad yer remembered it.
'Anna
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