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agricultural bible

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Written by Kaija Alexandra Thom

Wednesday, 02 January 2008

that's him, hard and heavy -- sun baked beneath farm six (what a field!) damp from the localized irrigation system, he's skinless as a french heel and little sheep look ripe upon the skyline as i thank the world for this sun Copyright 2008 Kaija Alexandra Thom Keyword: Report this story | Add to Favorites | Send to Friends | Author's Profile No Comments posted Comments (5) Posted by rock2003 2008-01-02 21:44:53 Made me want to read more. Again, the french heel and the sheep totally break the chiche. You don't think of someone wearing a french heel on the soil of farmland. The sheep seem to be a little bit too much, but again it isn't expected, so it might work well. + Report this comment Posted by Captain Morgen 2008-01-03 11:04:33 .... "skinless as a french heel" Thats sweet. I like it alot. + Report this comment Posted by dockyard 2008-01-03 17:22:03 .... thanks dudes. just a little exorcise i banged off. + Report this comment Posted by tarhead 2008-01-05 13:09:37 nice style. this tends to read according to the mood of the reader... + Report this comment Posted by Pilgrim 2008-09-07 13:19:05 .... I think I might be having difficulty with your style of poetry, and I'm not looking too deep, yet maybe I should. Farm six? I've never seen a french heel before. I'm clueless! + Report this comment Post a comment Post a comment

 

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