Short Stories
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Dark Balance III
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Dark Balance III |
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| Written by David Monroe | |
| Tuesday, 25 December 2007 | |
| Last Updated ( Thursday, 27 December 2007 ) |
A comfortable spring
day our vagrant is hiding amongst the remnants of a carpet depot, and
sees a familiar face walking from the entrance of a nearby shop, it’s
one of a very few people he could consider himself familiar with, the
doctor Dale Headstrum from his childhood, but his fear of any kind of
contact keeps Lucas at bay. However Lucas’s comfort level is tested as
Dale notices him.
Dale confused because
Lucas isn’t of age yet, and he wondered what circumstances brought him
to the streets, the system failed, Dale thought somehow that he failed
him, and started walking towards him. Lucas brimming with friction at
the conflict between the fears of human contact and bonding with
someone he’s familiar with, just as always his fear wins and starts
running as Dale peruses.
As they ran through
the streets Dale with his phone frantically calling whoever is noticed
by a local hoodlum and the chase is stopped short by a swift
clothesline move to Dales face with the butt of a hand gun, Dale is
bleeding, on the ground alive for now, and one less cell phone. Lucas
sees this and stops in his tracks.
Suddenly his entire
demeanor changed, he stood straight up instantly noticing the smells in
the air and was aware of everything around him, including the fear of
the doctor, it was beaming from him like cries for help. In that
instant his sword was drawn and still like being clamped in a vise yet
he held it with little effort, an extension of his own arm in perfect
balance. His head tilted slightly towards the ground and an eye pointed
at his soon to be target, the man was not fearful, and Lucas thinking
that his lack of fear will undoubtedly be his end.
The doctor was
astonished by his transformation, while he was the same person
physically, his mental changes even made that physical person totally
different just by the way he carried himself, a huge contrast of the
man he seen a few minutes ago. His search and patience with Lucas
during his childhood didn’t find any of his gifts, but now he was
staring it right in the face. Seeing his clarity, his focus the doctor
was less fearful. He needed to know just what Lucas was capable of, he
was about to see.
Unlike the guys in
the pawn shop the man didn’t laugh, he was a smart man and seen his
focus, while he wasn’t fearful he instantly took a couple shots at
Lucas one missing altogether and another deflected by the handle of his
sword, the assailant, and Dale alike assumed that the block was luck,
however Lucas somehow seen the bullet come through the air and reacted.
Lucas took cover while he counted the rounds.
Dale just hearing
bullets, while Lucas and the unknown man knew how many were left in the
magazine. Both were aware of the ensuing fight that would follow when
the clip emptied. It was apparent that the man had one clip and was
saving the last few shots for ones that would count. Lucas knowing this
was wondering how he could level the field, after a while Lucas finally
came from his cover and ran towards the man pretty much asking to get
killed.
The man pushed the
trigger once and just like before the bullet grazed off the handle of
his knockoff katana as with the last remaining round in the same exact
place was deflected in the exact same manner. The man with his empty
gun stood still face to face with Lucas as he simply, chopped off his
head. There was no lateral movement of his body when he was
decapitated; just a downward motion of his lifeless body to the ground,
his kill was flawless.
He had his clarity,
and was beaming with the prospect of sharing a bond with his childhood
friend when suddenly a memory flash came to him from the past when he
murdered the man in the alley that night for no good reason; he fell to
his knees and started crying uncontrollably, he’s taken this mans life,
and four others in ways that seemed honorable, but that man in the ally
will haunt his clarity, he thought forever.
Dale seeing his guilt
assumed that it was from the kill today; Lucas neither denied nor tried
to correct his thought pattern, he stood up in front of dale carefully
cleaning his blade.
We need to talk.
Comments (2) |
![]() 12-26-2007 00:52, Good imagery and storyline. » Reply to this comment... ![]() 12-27-2007 08:36, Paragraph structure lost in the clipboarding from word. I sent a revision. » Reply to this comment... |
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