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Written by Chris   
Sunday, 23 December 2007
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ImageA group of ten or so humans was standing around what appeared to be an oversized TV. As the image it displayed intensified several of the humans gasped. "What are they doing?" a puzzled human asked in shock.

"Well it looks like..." another answered then paused, appraising the situation, "I'd say they're fighting amongst themselves, I mean, this one is the farthest one we've ever found. I doubt we were beaten here."

"What morons.... Hey look over there! They've built a wall, wow. What a waste. I mean how do you man that monster?" the figure wondered aloud, gaping at their stupidity.

“Hey you can see it from here,” another human supplied, looking something resembling a window.

"Hm, do you think we should offer them peace?" a human snickered.

"I've heard better plans from half-wits," another laughed. "Well, remember the one we probed, only used like 10% of his brain!" a human yelled, pealing into a fit of laughter. Almost the entire party followed suit. "Yeah, they'd probably try to trick us to get weapons to kill each other," another one sighed.  

"Heck, they might even try to get us to fight for them!" the crowd slid into laughter again.

"Yeah," one of them sighed, "What's wrong with these aliens? Where is the common sense here? Guess we'll have to come back in another couple hundred years." "Okay, let's just hope they don't discover fission or something that destructive, in the mean time..." another human supplied. To that their spaceship turned and with that single movement, disappeared.

Copyright 2008 Chris
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Posted by tarhead
2007-12-25 00:09:53
I liked it

it reminded me of a movie that popped out years ago - where a few members of an alien race learned about humans from intercepted transmissions and spoke "commercial".
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Posted by C.R. Vard
2007-12-25 21:07:03
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had a formatting problem... I'll fix it
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Posted by Wesley Freeman
2007-12-26 17:44:29
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An interesting change of perspective. I like how you just referred to them as "humans" like we would call "aliens."
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