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Losing my best friend

My spirit cannot mend

Trying to pretend that I’m not bothered

Not fazed

But still I feel--betrayed

Every word I speak-- ignored

She looks bored

Run away from this dilemma  

She looks away in vain

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Posted by tarhead 2007-12-23 10:44:50 my new fiend every ending is a new beginning. + Report this comment
Posted by C.R. Vard 2007-12-23 21:36:05 .... I know this feeling all to well + Report this comment
Posted by Terry Collett 2007-12-28 12:34:57 .... Well written poem. I sense you here. Good. + Report this comment
Posted by rock2003 2008-01-02 22:27:49 .... The turn at the end of the poem works well. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-01-08 05:27:25 .... My new fiend... siblings are like that sometimes + Report this comment
Posted by danielgreene89 2008-02-26 17:55:50 wow cant say i know the feeling too well. but i can understand it. good poem + Report this comment
Posted by Roadkill315 2008-03-30 17:01:44 .... nice poem with a positive change in the end + Report this comment

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