Short Stories
Horror
Victim of Memory
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Victim of Memory |
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| Written by Ian Samuels | |
| Wednesday, 21 March 2007 | |
| Last Updated ( Friday, 23 March 2007 ) |
Thompson turns into the street, which was named on the card that Charley had given him; he hadn't been down this end of town before. The entire street was made up of two continuous lines of narrow 3-storey terraced houses, most had been converted into flats, although originally made from red brick, the whole street now looked a dull brown colour and ready to collapse at any moment. Thompson pulls up outside the house that had a number of Police officers outside. He shuts off his engine and clambers out, as he steps out the light of the day is blocked out by the large dark form of D.I. Garfield Jeffries. The imposing figure stands before Thompson blocking his view of the front door of the house.
Peace reigns supreme once more in the town of Brochmoor after two, bloody, fearful months the Police finally seemed to have got something right, the whispers on the street corners, in corner shops and W.I. meetings died down after only a week. But Thompson could find no peace inside his head. His break from work was rapidly becoming the worst time of his life, he was finding sleep difficult and when it did come it was far from pleasant or relaxing, he tosses and turns in a haunted sleep he finds himself seeing through the eyes of the murderer. He looks down on the bed, no covers just white sheets, on the bed lies a naked woman, blonde blue eyed, a mole under her left eye, full red lips and full chested. Thompson recognises her immediately as the killer's first victim, remembering her face from the first of the series of horrific photos. The woman smiles and beckons for him to join her, he sees a knife in his hand as he starts to hack at her breasts with the blade, the vision becomes stained with her blood; her screams subside into a bloody gurgling from her throat. The blade's assault halts and Thompson wakes, he finds his muscular body wet and clammy with sweat, breathing heavily Thompson reaches up to wipe sweat from his forehead. As he returns his hand to the warm place beneath the quilt he finds there his erect penis, sickened Thompson gags and lurches from his bed and hurtles towards the toilet, he charges through the door which flies back as it rebounds off the radiator sending a deafening clang throughout the building's central heating system, undoubtedly waking every resident, except for the old man upstairs who was practically deaf and the unemployed depressed insomniac across the hall from Thompson who never slept. Thompson's body heaves as he empties his stomach into the lavatory bowl.
"My God," he breathes, as he finishes his vomiting. "How could I be turned-on by such a disgusting sight?"
The following nights are no different for Thompson, agonisingly forced to witness the killing of each of the murderers consecutive victims, one after the other, night after night, and always viewed through the eyes of that evil bastard. Thompson still had another two weeks holiday to suffer before returning to work so he decides to see a psychoanalyst.
Thompson lay outstretched on the Analyst's couch waiting for his first session to begin; he looks around at the diplomas and plaques that adorn the walls of the analyst’s office including the diploma of psychology from the University of Vienna. That brought images of Freud to Thompson's mind and a smile to his face, probably the first time he had smiled in over two weeks, Thompson turns to the bespectacled, white bearded, white haired sexagenarian analyst, looking at him Thompson could almost believe it was Freud, which Thompson actually finds quite comforting. Finally, when the Analyst speaks Thompson can't believe his ears, it is an Austrian accent.
"Now, tell me Mr. Thompson, what seems to be the problem?"
"Nightmares, terrible nightmares." Thompson replies after taking a deep breathe, he shifts uncomfortably, was it enough information, had he said enough, had he said too much, soon his questions are answered, the Analyst shifts in his chair ready to write in his note book.
"If I am to help you Mr. Thompson I need more information. Now take you mind back, back to the beginning and start there."
Thompson begins to feel increasingly stupid, just start at the beginning, why didn't he think of that? He pauses for thought and after another deep breath he starts again.
"Well I'm a Detective Sergeant in the Police. I was working with Detective Inspector Jeffries on a murder case." A pause and another breath. "This guy was picking up girls in bars, he liked big chested girls, anyway he'd take them back to their place and make love too them all night, then in the morning he would take out a knife and hack them to pieces. He'd always started with the breasts, he loved that, turned him on, lots of blood, you see, anyway we finally managed to identify him. After two months he gave himself up, he was completely out of his mind, you see, and he couldn't take it anymore, as we were coming out of his place he wanted a fag, but when he reached into his jacket the marksman we had across the street, shot him. As the guy fell I caught him. He whispered to me as he lay dying. He said, ‘He's gone now, he was in my head but he's gone.’ I didn't know what he meant, but I reckoned that he was a schitz and he was on about the side of him that told him to kill, I dunno. Then I took some time off, but all the time I have been on leave I have been having these horrific nightmares. I have witnessed all the murders one after the other, night after night and always through the eyes of the murderer. They seriously freaked me out, that is of course why I called you."
As Thompson lays expectantly all he hears is the beating of his heart, the ticking of a clock and the scratching of the Analyst's pencil as he scribbles his notes, finally after what seemed like an eternity the Analysts Austrian voice breaks the silence.
"You said that the murderer, became sexually excited by what he did, tell me Mr. Thompson were you aroused by what you saw?"
"Of course not! How could anyone be turned-on by such ghastly sights?!" Thompson shouts in reply. The Analyst sits quietly waiting for Thompson to continue, Thompson pauses for another breath and continues. "Well, it did, the first time I woke up with a hard-... I mean an erection, I didn't realise at first, but when I did it made me vomit. It was the same each time, well, except that I kind of got used to it so, after a while it didn't make me sick." The Analyst skillfully utilises another lengthy pause before he finally replies.
"Ok Mr. Thompson. We haven't anymore time. Make an appointment with my secretary for the same time next week on your way out. I will see you then Mr. Thompson. Goodbye." Even though the abruptness and finality of the unexpected reply shocks him, Thompson gets off the couch and leaves without argument.
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Soon Thompson had gone through every murder, he had seen each one in Gore-rious Technicolor, but it didn't stop the nightmares. His mind forms a collection of images from all the murder scenes culminating in a collage of bloody images.
As Thompson wakes a strange feeling comes over him. He grips his erection hard and begins to pump, wanking himself off, grunting through gritted teeth he pumps harder and harder, faster and faster, as he comes he continues to pump, wanking every last drop of cum out, it runs down the back of his hand before dripping onto the sheet. So each morning Thompson would wank himself dry, finally one morning after his morning wank, he rubs his sore wrist and decides it was time he started picking up girls again.
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As Thompson makes his way for his second session with the Analyst he thinks about his situation, now he had a guaranteed hard-on every morning and decided to put it to good use preferably on a different girl every night, he could now enjoy the dreams and they were useful, i.e. the hard-on every morning, so what does he need an Analyst for he decides to tell the Analyst that he no longer needs him. Thompson sits in the reception area waiting his time in the Analyst's chair, every time he looks up he gets a friendly smile from the plump, brunette receptionist, he nervously flicks through a magazine he had picked up from the table, he wasn't reading it, he didn't even know the title of the magazine. Soon he sees the previous patient exit the Doctor's office, Thompson is called in. He takes a deep breath, he doesn't approach the couch, but goes straight to the analyst’s desk and before the Analyst has a chance to speak Thompson blurts out his thoughts.
"I'm ok now Doc., I don't need you. The dreams don't freak me out anymore, in fact I thought that having a guaranteed hard-on every morning could be quiet entertaining, so I have decided to put it to good use, thanks Doc."
With that Thompson quickly leaves the building. He couldn't believe he had just blurted everything out without even a thought for the consequences, but as he believed it was unlikely he would see the Analyst again it didn't really matter. As he walks back to his apartment he sees a beautiful woman walking along on the other side of the road, not unlike other young men he begins to form an image in his mind, the tall elegant blue eyed, full chested blonde lays naked in bed, Thompson kneads her large, full breasts as he makes love to her, but the image changes as he sees a knife in his hand and he starts to hack at her breasts he watches the blood fly and flow freely from her wounds. Thompson becomes turned on by his bloody fantasy, the woman passes by and Thompson smiles.
Back at his flat Thompson sits at his desk with a piece of paper and a pen.
"Write the facts." He says to nobody. "One; I pick up a girl in the bar, go back to her place, make love all night and leave the next morning, Two; police find her dead." As he speaks he writes the list out on the sheet of paper. "Not looking too good for the home side so far, um, now I couldn't be too sure if I'd killed the first girl or not, but I'm pretty sure I didn't kill the second one which now makes me pretty sure I didn't kill the first, still not too convincing though. Well only one way to find out for sure." Thompson leaves his flat and makes his way to the bar.
Thompson was just starting his sixth pint when he sees a girl; she looks at him, smiles and offers to buy him a drink. "Great I'll have a double scotch." Not his normal drink, but tonight for some reason he is feeling adventurous, after a few more scotches Thompson starts to feel not so adventurous, in fact he is feeling rather ill.
"Sorry I'm not feeling too great. I think I'll have to go." They leave together, say their goodbyes and go their separate ways; Thompson decides that the whiskey was not a good idea and vows never to drink the damned stuff again.
* * *
Thompson arrives at work; as usual he is twenty minutes late, he makes his way to report to Jeffries as he reaches the office he shares with Jeffries the sight of the dark 6 foot 5 inch figure putting his trench coat on halts him.
"Ah there you are Thomo, come on we got another one." As they leave the building they are mobbed by the press.
"Did you shoot an innocent man, Inspector?" One shouts. "Is it true that there's a police officer involved in the murders?" A woman asks. Jeffries stands staring at them, they all fall silent.
"To answer your questions," His commanding voice booms across the car park. "No we didn't shoot the wrong man, he was the right man, but the shooting was an accident and yes there is an officer involved, that officer is me, I'm trying to investigate. Now get out of here!"
They all start to move except one brave man. "Have you got a suspect yet?" The other journalists who hadn't got too far away start to move away quicker as Jeffries bears down on the man who's bravery is quickly vanishing.
"Why feeling guilty?" Jeffries threatens. "Now fuck off out of my way!"
The ground seems to shake and many of the leaving journalists break out into a half-run. At the murder scene Jeffries looks around with a profoundly bored look on his face.
"Nothing we haven't seen before." He turns to Thompson. "What have you got for me Thomo, it better be good."
"Not much yet, but I think I know a way to get what we want. It also means that no more girls will be killed. Oh and by the way I didn't spend the night with this one, I never came here. I wasn't feeling well."
At the funeral of Detective Sergeant Simon Thompson the police gathered in formal uniform, except for Jacqui Bloomfield and Garfield Jeffries, who believing the killer was still at large continued his investigations. Simon's parents stand either side of the weeping Jacqui, comforting her. The vicar finishes his sermon; Simon's parents join the rest of the gathered family and leave Jacqui alone at the graveside. Jacqui throws her flowers into the grave, she looks tired; she hasn't been able to sleep, she has been having terrible nightmares, horrid, bloody dreams, she felt disgusted with herself, she couldn't believe she actually found the dreams sexually arousing, being turned on by the bloody mosaics. She looks up from the gapping pit and watches the departing uniformed procession. At the rear is a beautiful young WPC. Jacqui can see her in her mind's eye lying naked in bed, she could see the girl bleeding from the knife wounds in her breasts, Jacqui's breathing increases, her hand strays to the front of her skirt, but is startled by a voice from behind her. She recognises the voice immediately. Simms!
"Nice isn't she, you'd like to see her naked, wouldn't you, you'd like to see her bleed, wouldn't you, you'd like to see her dead, wouldn't you." He leans closer and whispers in her ear. "Pleasant dreams Jacqui, pleasant dreams."
Copyright 2007 Ian Samuels
Comments (3) |
![]() 03-23-2007 12:08, This story makes me think... Who was the real killer here? » Reply to this comment... ![]() 05-29-2007 17:25, amazing! :eek » Reply to this comment... ![]() 11-14-2007 14:57, wow... that was good. but why does it feel like i've seen a movie with similar plot? » Reply to this comment... |
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