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Short Stories Horror The Chat from Hell
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The Chat from Hell |
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| Written by Max Booth III | |
| Wednesday, 21 November 2007 | |
| Last Updated ( Thursday, 22 November 2007 ) |
*********at 10:24 PM Maddyindiana32 joined the room Maddyindiana32
“Hi everybody.”
Elvis_fan_4_life
“Sup.”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“How’s it going?”
Maddyindiana32
“Okay. Kinda tired, though. Just got done with a huge argument with my teenage daughter. God, she can be so evil sometimes! Lol.”
Elvis_fan_4_life
“Lol…I know what you mean! I have a thirteen year old son and he’s always coming home in a police car. Teenagers are evil.”
Maddyindiana32
“So, where are you from?”
Elvis_fan_4_life
“Tennessee. I visit Graceland once a week.”
Maddyindiana32
You like Elvis, eh? I never got into him myself. I was a Zeppelin fan.”
Elvis_fan_4_life
“Oh, not me, the king is the king.”
Maddyindiana32
“What happened to that Hatchet guy? Is he still online?”
Elvis_fan_4_life
“Yeah…he’s pretty weird, though. We were talking later and I’d ask him a question, but he’d take like three minutes to answer. He’s probably just reading our conversation, that creep.”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“I’d shut your mouth if I was you.”
Elvis_fan_4_life
“Oh yeah? And what if I don’t?”
Maddyindiana32
“Oh, come on. Don’t be fighting.”
Elvis_fan_4_life
“Don’t worry…he won’t answer for another 35 minutes or so. Lol.”
Maddyindiana32
“Well…still, you shouldn’t be mean.”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“Thank you, Miss Maddy.”
Maddyindiana32
“It’s no problem.”
Elvis_fan_4_life
“Oh, so now you two are teaming up. Well, HaTcHeTfAcE, you gonna answer my question?”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“What question was that again?”
Elvis_fan_4_life
“What if I don’t stop talking about you? What the hell are you gonna do about it?”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“I’ll chop your mother’s guts open and feed them to you.”
Elvis_fan_4_life
“Fuck you, ya sick bastard.”
*********at 10:33 PM Elvis_fan_4_life left the room HaTcHeTfAcE
“Thank God he’s gone.”
Maddyindiana32
“Umm…are you like…sick in the head?”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“Lol…no, I was just sick of him talking smack. In truth, I wouldn’t hurt a fly. Sorry if I scared you.”
Maddyindiana32
“That’s okay, but he didn’t seem that bad to me.”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“Lol…you didn’t hear him before. He was swearing more than somebody waiting in line at the DMV.”
Maddyindiana32
“Lmao! I’m glad he’s gone, then.”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“So, what do you do for a living?”
Maddyindiana32
“I’m a artist. I illustrate books.”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“Really? I never killed an artist before.”
Maddyindiana32
“What?”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“Lol…just kidding.”
Maddyindiana32
“Oh…lol…what do you do?”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“I’m a homicidal maniac (lol jk). I work at a law branch. I don’t want to talk about my job, though, I can’t stand it as it is. Your name is Madison, correct?”
Maddyindiana32
“Yes.”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“Such a beautiful name.”
Maddyindiana32
“Thank you! What’s your name?”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“HaTcHeTfAcE.”
Maddyindiana32
“That isn’t your real name…is it?”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“No…of course not.”
Maddyindiana32
“So, what’s your real name?”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“I don’t want to tell you.”
Maddyindiana32
“Ummm…ok then…”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“Let’s say we talk about something else, okay?”
Maddyindiana32
“Okay. What shall we chat about?”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“I don’t know. Can I ask you a question?”
Maddyindiana32
“Sure.”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“How do you want to die?”
Maddyindiana32
“Excuse me?”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“I asked you ‘how do you want to die?’”
Maddyindiana32
“I’m afraid I don’t know what you mean.”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“Well…I have a duffle bag full of things. I have (of course) a hatchet, a butcher knife, a screwdriver, a Desert Eagle .50, and a sawed off shotgun. So, which one of those wonderful weapons do you want to be killed by?”
Maddyindiana32
“Oh, I get it…another joke. I’m Lmfao, okay? Well, just to be fun, how would you kill me? You don’t even know where I live.”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“I’m in your house, Madison.”
Maddyindiana32
“Oh, yeah? How can you be in my house if you’re on a computer?”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“I’m using you dead daughter’s pink laptop.”
Maddyindiana32
“My daughter isn’t dead.”
HaTcHeTfAcE
“She is now. She’s laying on the white carpet in her room with a puddle of blood leaking out of her head. Her brown hair is a mess! So, you gonna answer my question? How do you want to die? Like your daughter, (I used the hatchet on her), or possibly the sawed off shotgun? You decide.”
*********at 10:45 PM Maddyindiana32 left the room HaTcHeTfAcE
“Lol…this should be fun…”
*********at 10:45 PM HaTcHeTfAcE left the room
Copyright 2007 Max Booth III
Comments (40) |
 11-22-2007 19:06, creepy... i guess i won't be chatting online for a while... thanks.. » Reply to this comment...  11-22-2007 21:11, it reminded me of the movie with the killer in the house theme - but his choice was the phone. kinda hard to cut somebody's phone line now isn't it! *somewhere around the middle where you were explaining your problem with hatchetface you went future tense instead of past tense ;) » Reply to this comment... 11-22-2007 22:55, wow - totally creepy » Reply to this comment...  11-23-2007 09:44, That was creative and creepy way to tell a story! » Reply to this comment...  11-24-2007 14:35, im glad you all like my story. thanks for your comments 8) » Reply to this comment... 11-24-2007 16:19, I dunno why. but this reminds me of the movie Scream. 'Hello... Sidney...' freaky... » Reply to this comment... 11-24-2007 21:14, Remind me to be nice to you. hehe » Reply to this comment...  11-25-2007 14:11, Never liked today's internet lingo. I remember when people actually used whole words, like "laugh out loud" or "laughing my ass off." Teens these day are evil. Just because I'm 16 doesn't mean I have to act or think like a teen. Still, when it comes to arguments with people online, I always lose. Now if I was face to face with the person, it wouldn't be too big a problem. As paranoid as I am, I would know if someone came into my house to kill me. Good story. » Reply to this comment... 11-25-2007 18:51, Interesting! » Reply to this comment... 11-30-2007 16:58, :p dude that story wuz so freaky!!!ohmigod how skary!!!!!!!!hoowee! » Reply to this comment...  12-01-2007 03:40, This story is an extreme reason why my son won't be chatting on the web when he becomes a teenager. You did a supurb job on this story! » Reply to this comment... 12-01-2007 09:18, :eek » Reply to this comment... 12-01-2007 09:20, Anyone have gud stories to tell me pls....its boring like hell here. :( » Reply to this comment...  12-02-2007 09:40, Lovely; we're left hanging, don't even know if anyone actually dies or not. Uh, there are obvious limitations to writing only in dialog, and it shows here. But that's the entire point, I suppose. It's entertaining and somewhat novel. Good job. Cheers. » Reply to this comment...  12-05-2007 10:29, Wow, thats very interesting and freaky, one of my friends actually had something like this happen to her once, very freaky, execpt it wasnt ofver the internet or anything, they have alarms on everydoor and everytime a door opens it sets off the alarm and someone went threw her entire house exept for her room and set off all the alarms so that she wouldnt know where he was, luckily her door started barking and she had a phone in her room. She called the cops but they never found the guy. » Reply to this comment... 12-16-2007 14:14, i am really glad you all liked my chat from hell. thank you all so much for your comments. 8) » Reply to this comment...  12-17-2007 13:48, great dialogue. great creativity, and you did a good job of creating a realistic situation. :grin :grin » Reply to this comment... 12-29-2007 00:36, Gee, thanks. Sitting here alone, at night reading about a creepy murderer that's killing people. I feel a lot better now. :p Haha. Still a great story! Good job! » Reply to this comment... 12-29-2007 12:02, I liked it....really liked it....God... » Reply to this comment...  01-07-2008 20:10, This is a great concept set out in a unique format. Well done » Reply to this comment...  01-09-2008 14:56, Luved the story. Really creepy. well done. » Reply to this comment...  01-12-2008 10:33, very creepy, never seen that done before. Nice approach to a classic killer-in-the-house » Reply to this comment...  02-06-2008 04:35, I loved this, really creepy.Love those weird stories. » Reply to this comment...  02-08-2008 07:23, Holy crap. Dude, that is sadistic...but I like it...ALOT! Really good job on the dramazation. I am really impressed. What's so creepy about it is that it relates to something most of us do everyday. You never know who you could be talking to online. Great work. Like I said: I'm REALLY impressed. Keep up the good work. » Reply to this comment...  02-11-2008 08:06, that was a creepy yet well told story. I have the chills now. (Keep em coming) » Reply to this comment...  02-11-2008 08:18, chat rooms are scary. This was freaky and scared me to some extent. Very well done... » Reply to this comment... 02-11-2008 09:13, I agree with Lorislittlesecret. I read it twice and it gets scarier ever time. » Reply to this comment...  02-14-2008 15:12, To me this wasn't very believable. I don't meet many people who use perfect grammar or that style of conversation in chat rooms. It reads as if they are actually talking rather than typing to each other. » Reply to this comment... 03-03-2008 16:51, i see your point » Reply to this comment... 03-08-2008 08:20, ya u shud have characters use more internet talk instead of full length words.... otherwise great story wonderful » Reply to this comment...  03-18-2008 17:28, Hehe not bad, made me smile! » Reply to this comment...  03-19-2008 10:37, holy crap that's scary, seriously! I need to know more! » Reply to this comment...  03-19-2008 17:12, awesome! (but I bet hatchetface WAS her daughter...lol) » Reply to this comment... » See all 1 replie(s)  03-20-2008 08:03, You know why this is so great? Because it's an embodiment of the era we live in (very important). It has a very appealing format, making it an easy read. Made this one stand out Max; can't believe I'm reading it till now. Great job. » Reply to this comment... 03-20-2008 14:21, wow. that was a scary one. » Reply to this comment...  03-24-2008 11:07, this is called 'storiesville'...just checking. » Reply to this comment... 03-26-2008 13:23, lol that was totally creepy. i was like omg did this actually happen? ahh. neways it was really good. gave me the chills. » Reply to this comment... 03-29-2008 22:53, thank you all. what you guys dont know is that this is a true story,,,ha ha ha ha? » Reply to this comment...  04-08-2008 07:49, reminds me the reason why i love to chat, that is i get to meet crazy people like myself » Reply to this comment...  04-22-2008 08:42, How creepy!!! Remind me never to talk to someone in real time. » Reply to this comment... |
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