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Redemption Go back to the story Comment in question Posted by Dirkin 04-13-2008 03:12,   ... Hey this was really good. An intricate plot, well realised characters with history, demons and individual flair, a convincing villain... well done. I think this piece shows a lot of writing talent.   » Report this comment to administrator »    1 replies Posted by Crazy Scott 04-13-2008 04:48,   Thanks! This was actually written for a contest on another site, and the ending had been through several edits. I liked the way that it turned out, and I'm glad to hear that you did, too!    Thanks for taking the time to comment on it!   » Report this comment to administrator