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Five pints of cider & a packet of crisps Go back to the story Comment in question
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Five pints of cider & a packet of crisps Go back to the story Comment in question
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04-07-2008 08:12,
I too found the flow a bit rough, but I hung on since it obviously contained a lot of thought. Is wanker a military rank, hilarious line.
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