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Five pints of cider & a packet of crisps Go back to the story Comment in question Posted by R.E.Potter 04-07-2008 08:06,   ,,, That was a crazy story...it was hard to read the drunken slurs of the two characters, and Im not even sure I understood the ending....aliens melting? I mean, it wasnt a bad story,,it was just hard for me to kinda get in a flow.   » Report this comment to administrator »    1 replies Posted by hamish2003 04-08-2008 01:40,   Five pints of cider & a packet of crisps Thanks.  I take the point about the slurs. I wrote it a long time ago and even I now have trouble with them [and I'm an alcoholic !!! ] They melted due to the ingestion of cider & crisps which I admit was a bit stupid of them having come all the way from a distant galaxy only to posion themselves on the local "food".   » Report this comment to administrator