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Poetic Hideaway Go back to the story Comment in question Posted by Sad Sara 03-26-2008 18:11,   If 'ifs' and 'buts' were candy and nuts Then everyday'd be Christmas    But what if my poetic mind   Starts to go blind -But what if it doesn't?  What if it catches moments in time and slows them down to tick within the mind at any speed yer wish?  Poetic Highways have bumps, that's why there's an 'oh shit' handle. Juss hang on, or take another path. Aye believe when I say that if yer continue down the road which yer are on yer juss might end up where yer headed. Uh-oh yer mused me again. Yer like doin' that huh?    Road Destruction     While driving down poetic road   I see a sign that reads   Thought destruction up ahead   But still my mind proceeds     I try to shift creatively   But as I'm changing gears   A warning sign of pettiness   Now suddenly appears     Imagination's forced to stop   Since there's no other lane   Then my vision is obscured   By salty falling rain     I try to turn, but it's too late   And as our thoughts collide   I wonder why you can't shut up *not yer  And just enjoy the ride     I Like yer Poem   » Report this comment to administrator »    1 replies Posted by Sad Sara 03-26-2008 18:18,   Also I ran out of space in me last comment box, yer know, because I cannot shut up. Anyway, what I was gonna tell yer was this verse is very creative and while being introspective, yer candidness is akin to one of which I could find within me own traits. A hideaway's good, as is a drive, walk, talk, or any type of life yer decide to take hold of that day. Cause yer know, it's yers fer the taking. Oi! yer mused me again, but I won't torture yer twice on one Poem. Such behavior is not a very good way to gain friends. hehe  By the way, is this like a game of Poetic hide and seek? Am I suppose to go find yer?   Cheeky, aye, but juss a lil' bit today.    Take care Sorrowful One    'Anna   » Report this comment to administrator