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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
03-26-2008 04:27,
 
That was great
and sad.... I always like it when poetry that does not exactly rhyme just comes together based on rythm and some intangible quality that makes it click as poetry. Takes gut instinct to do that, while people like me count syllables! 
 
Great shit! 
(this was George )
 
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Posted by Sad Sara
03-26-2008 22:04,
 
Yer count syllables?
What a dork, I don' know what me brother Katie ever saw in yer. 
 
Hehe 
 
Poetry's an art that is versified, not an equation to be formulated. 
 
Katie'll show yer a Poetic thing or two, he writes lovely. hehe 
 
Oh, well yer already know that though. 
 
Huh, Sleepy Angel? 
 
Ding, fries are done...
 
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