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Might be worth the next bit be about why they were fighting and why he wants her so badly. Maybe along the lines of it being the future and men have to fight to take a mate do the the lack of women. Maybe she betrayed him before somehow. Hope that helps
Short Stories
03-24-2008 06:48,
i find if i leave a story for a few days it helps. You come back refreshed if you know what i mean.
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