this is actually
three stories smacked together. i wrote the first one a while back, then the last one jumped into my head - i had to wait patiently for the middle to work itself out before i could i finish...
it's a lot to read (a little over 3,250 words), but i managed to get less than a 5% passive sentence count - that probably only means something to my little self...
03-20-2008 10:14,
Wowe..this was a long one for you. As always, breathtaking
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