A Healing Mathew ignored the horrendous smell, but passed out as... TO WHOM IT MIGHT CONCERN (Gambia Oct '08) It is not all fun being invisible, not all about...

Seven Letter Word Go back to the story Comment in question Posted by Pez 02-11-2008 11:01,   ... Agh! What a disturbing thing to be curious about... death. I liked how the main character was monotonous throughout the whole predicament. That adds to the 'horror' effect.    You could of meant something by the 'drowning family' (as Tarhead suggests) but I think it was more of a visual aid... for their flailing arms... but I dunno.    But, overall, good job.   » Report this comment to administrator »    1 replies Posted by Egoist 02-22-2008 05:25,   ... Hey thanks, I guess it was more like a visual aid, I don't know where I got the idea for the drowning part actually. I can't believe that part turned out to be noticeable, when I was writing it, I just sort of wrote it and continued without stopping to think what it was actually about. Thanks though, a lot.   » Report this comment to administrator