Birth of the White Buffalo The bell hanging from the handle of the door... The Exorcism of Oprah Winfrey I hear her voice call out my name and I sigh....

Seven Letter Word Go back to the story Comment in question Posted by Blackxink 01-27-2008 11:59,   great...but... I think this is a great story. it kept me on the edge of my seat, even though it was only for a minute or so. The way you portray the imagery in this is wonderful; absolutely insiring. my only criticism is: i think you should let us know what happens to your main character, and tell us if the parents, plus the sister, proceed through the baracaded door. those are only suggestions of course, i would never tell you how to write your own stories. keep writing, you're great.   » Report this comment to administrator »    1 replies Posted by Egoist 01-27-2008 15:26,   ... Thank you for your comment. What you said was helpful, and I'm not offended.    I guess one of my favorite things to do with my stories, would be leaving them at a short ending, making the reader decide how it ended.     Thank you once again.   » Report this comment to administrator