Awakening of Minds (part one) So there I was, looking once more at the device... COME INTO MY ARMS - The Arrival, Chapter 1 Sophia saw the new arrival from her bedroom...

Haze VII: One More Floor Go back to the story Comment in question Posted by Behind_the_Mask 05-05-2008 08:04,   hmmm I like the story so far, fast paced and suspenseful. Perhaps instead of having a bunch of different short chapters just put them all in one, dunno I am no expert. Perhaps a bit more filler in each of the chapters.   » Report this comment to administrator »    1 replies Posted by Guitarist986 05-05-2008 17:32,   sorry about that i had them all in one big story but no one seemed to be reading them as one big one so i separated one but ill put in one big one just for you guys   » Report this comment to administrator