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04-25-2008 10:00,
Excuse the title of my comment,
I liked this story a lot, not only did it have some horror in it but it had some mystery/suspence. it reminded me of how I got together with my Fiance, she of course being Clair, minus the awesome dream killer powers.
I would have to say that it is a good story, but you lost me around the a few weeks later part. perhaps you could add more on to it, like what did he do to her. Did she get Pregnant and thats why she moved?
But all in all i love this story
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