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04-23-2008 15:07,
Sorry, didn't understand this. Some of the sentences ran on and lost me. Maybe an edit for grammatical errors would help, for example, this is one of the sentences that lost me: "she used wake up having a good morning message to start her day, but there weren't any today. not from him at the very least."