Ebony Eyes Her name was Carly, Carly Richardson and Ricky had... There Is No Me Without You You're all I think about, Watching you...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by 1800 04-22-2008 10:44,   ... Ha, this was like "Alien" and "Sunshine" ('s) hybrid child.     I especially like you when you write in 1st person point of view; it's when your writing is the best. I liked this one a lot, it was very well-written and self-explanatory (that is I was able to understand the setting perfectly). I was drawn into the story as well.    Very, very good job!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story