Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by CELL 04-22-2008 09:40,   ... This had a dystopian feel to it. A time where there isn't even a remnant of hope... just misery, disease, oppression, political corruption, war, pollution... though, of course, this can easily be describing our current social state (on a worldly scale).    I like this line:    "Everyday it gets harder to breathe    Putting on the respirator has now become a daily routine"     This made me think of natural selection, you know, adapting to one's environment... and how man is slowly growing incompetent. Man is not physically adapting to his environment; he is creating devices (technology) to aid him in, basically, everything... he is not fit.    Ahh! See how you make the wheels in my head turn!    Oi, but this line:     "But praying is nothing but a waste of time    Down here we are no more important than the filthy flies" I do not like that faith in God has been lost :(.    I liked this one too! Great job!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story