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Posted by CELL
04-20-2008 11:41,
 
Pretty well-written.
European soldiers in combat (throughout the 1600's - 1700's) came to mind with the word 'bayonet', but before that you mentioned 'gas masks' and those weren't in use until the 1900's, I think, so virtually a different type of soldier came to mind, as did the first two World Wars... but then I remembered that in World War I some sort of bayonet was used so that's the final picture I got. So you did a good job in imagery. 
 
The horrors of massacring passing towns/villages came through; very unjust... 
 
And the first 2 lines brought forth a great truth. I suppose when swamped with worries one can sometimes yearn for death, but when actually faced with it, animal/human instinct kicks in and we thoughtlessly want to fight to preserve our life...
 
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