Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Crazy Scott 04-19-2008 06:50,   Thanks again! But...Hmm. Does it really read as though twenty armed bandits are in fact, 'defenseless humans'? If you really think so, then I'll address that issue when I do my edit, because that wasn't how I wanted it to seem at all. I guess I chose poorly when trying to decide what to leave in and out of this chapter, because I could have easily written it as 10,000 words and I was trying to avoid that by chopping the fat, so to speak. But you make a valid point, I now see upon reflection.    And yes, please keep reading. She does, in fact, find herself challenged... *grin* Glad that you enjoy the story, and thanks for pointing out things that I need to fix. I would like to think that this would be publishable one day, even though I know it isn't there as it sits now...   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story