Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by ThomasP3 04-18-2008 15:03,   ... I kind of understnad the intent, but not the means by which it was acheived. I was half expecting her to jump in front of the train rather than steal his wallet from the sad tone. The first paragraph seemed to be a bit choppy, or jumbled. By "minus" I believe you meant "might as"? All in all a nice lttle tale, although a touch to cynical.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story