Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by SageSyren 04-18-2008 12:04,   ... 'Almost naked(,) he was...' missing comma  '..beating drums(,) keeping a...' missing comma  '..the gone before to ...' missing word?  '...still stood(,) their outlines blurred...' missing comma    I have a Native American friend who would just love this story. It was very good.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story