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04-17-2008 08:04,
Wise message.
Only complaint is that your poetry is much too straightforward (and many people like that), but I personally like it when the significance of a poem is left for the reader to figure out.
So maybe be, just a tad, subtle at times(?).
I really love the message you have here though.