A Simple Misunderstanding From the open elevator Trevin saw her walking down the... Her Magic Touch, Chapter 2 Luckily the bus stop is near where she lives and is...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by ThomasP3 04-17-2008 01:54,   ... Nice idea, but I couldn't understand it. I had to read it to slowly and could make sense of it. Maybe a suggestion to add a reverted version directly below for those of us more intellectually challenged. Again though, nice idea.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story