Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by SageSyren 04-16-2008 10:16,   ... Oh I don't know, pirates and knights might come to a drunken mind if one had just seen or read about them.    I like it this way, although I would have liked to read the other version also.    I did feel like the flow was off in paragraphs two and four, but it sets a good scene.  Syren   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story