Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Tarhead Mugwump 04-16-2008 09:52,   another long one! definitely like buddy - young/old, happy go lucky/serious - you are doing a great job with him...    tasha is consistent, and i like the flashbacks.    big bill's downfall was very large (physically); any chance you could break it up into a coupla paragraphs?    the only place i got hung - was in the sentence that included minutes. seems that the timeline would be more sun/moon moments than mechanical...    well, you did it, i'm completely immersed.    write on!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story