Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Crazy Scott 04-16-2008 04:27,   Dang it... I have a thing for westerns, and I'm afraid that most of my 'archaic' settings in my stories end up having a western feel to them. Apparently, I can't help myself in that regard. And when I wrote it, I was hungry for a hamburger, so I tossed that in. I guess the good thing about fantasy is that you can make up the fact that in the world of Cardia, they invented meat grinders a long dang time ago... *laughs*    You're NOT the first person to call me out on those two things, if you were wondering... later on, I have a HUGE snafu in that I have them harvesting hay in the spring. It's plot specific, so I can't change it until I do the massive edit that I have planned for later on this year, at which point the entire story will take place in the fall, instead of spring so I can accomodate the harvest.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story