Better Day Tomorrow Walking the streets and not going home after work... Days of End (a journey of man), Chapter 1 As he stepped from his vehicle; he lifted his...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Crazy Scott 04-15-2008 11:42,   Fan-freakin'-tastic! Okay, I'm hooked. This was pretty bleepin' good, and I like how Pax's character is fleshing out, and the story around him. The detail is good by not overwhelming, the technology impressive but not confusing. Again, you did a great job with the sci-fi aspect of this one, while keeping the human element close to the surface.    I'm impressed. And hoping that you write quickly, as well, because I'm impatient for more...    Really fun read!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story