Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Roadkill315 04-14-2008 08:19,   How dare she... First paragraph had me grab my coat; being frigid and all :-)    And then you set this girl he recalling up to be amazing, but what perked my interest here was the sentence, "was destined to change the world." My question then was, whose world? Just his, or really the whole world? That sentence is what I really wanted answered in reading onward.    As I went on my opinion of this guy formed to be one of what a lush, had he never been in love before? Was he real young, was this puppy love?? But he spoke of someone older, so again I wanted to shake him and wake him up as he seemed to fixated on his online find whom he referenced as a god. To ever consider a girl friend or more even a god, oh my. But who am I to judge...    And then the ending, what a lonely dude. How dare she crush him so; what kind of god was she? Cruel indeed!    Hey, great short work here, thanks!   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story