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04-13-2008 00:37,
The ending was really powerful...The anguish of the narrator was well rendered through the whole story. I would like to know more about the bond between these two people, I understood it was strong and everything, but knowing more about it would bring even more emotion to the ending...And you also did a great job with the horrible little details concerning death, it was really creepy.