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04-12-2008 20:53,
I enjoyed the story and I commend you on it. It had some good original thinking in it. I agree with the first comment that it was a bit confusing, especially at the beginning. I thought that perhaps she had been injured while attempting to catch the frisbee. Nice writing though.
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