Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Crazy Scott 04-12-2008 11:09,   ... Okay, did I say something about 'cliche' in the comment on the first chapter? You may ignore that, and I apologize for it. This was wonderful, and the imagery was delightful. Whereas you could have taken this story in any number of bland directions, you threw in enough mysticism to keep it fresh and entertaining, and to keep the reader curious as to what is REALLY happening here.    Damn nice job here, and kudos on a second fun read in this series. If you would only be so kind as to continue it...?   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story